everything you are doing in this frame is quite wondrous to behold! kudos are due graziella, robert and SCL for their work too.
i really don't want to fault anyone... but the lighting and the backdrop are clearly the weak links here. of all possible outcomes, that's far from a failing. i like natural light shooting and this looks natural to me.
certainly, though i fear you're reading far too much negativity into my comments.
ulorin is a first-rate model, and even in her extraordinary portfolio, i think this was exceptionally good posing, make-up and wardrobe. i wanted to acknowledge that.
in the image i see, i feel the background and lighting were somewhat dull and lifeless when compared with the astounding beauty of the 'raw material.' i can't speak to your artistic intentions and preferences, and i worded it as delicately as i could, it remains only my perhaps too particular opinion. regards. _lac